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Mickey Loves B Ball

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Mickey plays basketball in his free time, He has a very cool slam dunk as well. When he is shooting hoops, he feels sublime. As Minnie watched him play, her heart would swell. He has a very cool slam dunk as well, Him and his gang would play ball on weekends. As Minnie watched him play, her heart would swell, He enjoys hanging out with his best friends. Him and his gang would play ball on weekends, When he is shooting hoops, he feels sublime. He enjoys hanging out with his best friends, Mickey plays basketball in his free time. 07-26-2021 Contest: Pantoum Rhyme 1 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2021 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I want Mickey on my team. Go Team. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/17/2021 10:43:00 AM

This is a definitely a "slam dunk" and three point shot Alexis. Congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/16/2021 9:20:00 AM

Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 8:39:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/14/2021 12:42:00 PM

Hi Eve, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/30/2021 10:10:00 AM

Hi Alexis, Very Cute, Mickey Mouse is my hero, such a cartoon sweetheart - best wishes for a win my dear friend. hugs and blessing Jenny.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/29/2021 1:30:00 AM

Fun write, Alexis, I chose the same picture too:)

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/2/2021 9:18:00 PM

Hi Jo, Thank you very much. You did? Off to read yours now:-)Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/27/2021 12:02:00 PM

The USA could have used Mickey in Tokyo!

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/27/2021 12:37:00 PM

Lol! Rico, They sure could have. I appreciate that you stopped by today:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2021 11:07:00 AM

- I'm sure Minnie is proud of Mickey ... I do not understand why they never got married ... :))) - Best wishes in the contest with this lovely poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/27/2021 3:57:00 AM

Delightful write! All the best for contest

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2021 1:25:00 AM

Love your interpretation of the picture Alexis, If I was playing I'd need stilts lol. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/26/2021 10:16:00 PM

A delightful pantoum, Alexia. Best for a win.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/26/2021 4:12:00 PM

This is a fantastic pantoum, Alexis. It is a wonderful contest entry. Good luck! Blessings, Evelyn :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/26/2021 3:40:00 PM

I loved loved Mickey, still have a ceramic one in my house from when I went on my honey moon 43 years ago, lol, its an antique now. Much loved your poem dear Alexis xo

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2021 2:40:00 PM

what a sweet fun poem Alexis:-) good luck in the contest:-) hug Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/26/2021 2:27:00 PM

Nicely spun, Alexis, in this hard to execute form. All the best.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2021 2:13:00 PM

Way to go for the contest. I enjoyed this one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara