Micheal

You came into this world as a blessing Fighting for your life Soon life was yours Then it was almost taken from you again You fought that off as well Life was suppose to be long for you I thought you would be around for awhile But then in one heart beat Your life was taken away It ended to quickly Now I will never be able To see your loving face Your smile that lights up my day every time I see you You were the little brother I never had Now I realize that You were my little brother!! And I will forever miss you...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/30/2024 2:05:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/11/2016 10:48:00 AM

Jessica,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/10/2009 4:15:00 AM

Jessica, it is a very sad poem. I experienced the same when my kid brother passed away. I missed him so much. In the soupland you will find many brothers and sisters. Welcome aboard. Ernilando

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 3/27/2009 3:52:00 PM

A great tribute to your brother. Be strong...he's in the good hands of the Lord. Hope you find peace. Welcome to soupland! God bless, Ernesto

Date: 3/27/2009 12:40:00 PM

Nice tribute to your brother. Accept my sympathy. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

David Smalling

Date: 3/26/2009 8:30:00 AM

Welcome to poetrysoup, may the friendhsip here heal your sorrow and keep you writing beautiful songs. God bless you

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/25/2009 4:46:00 PM

Jessica, I am so sorry for your loss, I know how painful it is to lose someone you love and feel such an emptiness when they are gone...The only comfort is knowing that they are in heaven with our Lord and savior resting in him... I pray God gives you the strength,comfort and peace you need to recover from this terrible loss.Welcome to Poetrysoup, God Bless,Keep sharing~ Always, Tyesha

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2009 4:41:00 PM

I'm sorry for your loss, Jessica. It's so sad to see a baby die soon after birth. Your writing evokes great sadness and pain. Very well expressed grief. Bless you, Carolyn

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/25/2009 4:32:00 PM

So very sorry for your terrible loss Jessica. A beautiful and deeply emotional tribute to your little brother. Wishing you healing and peace. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please keep writing. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/25/2009 4:30:00 PM

you will miss him,you re human,but remember he s in the place of no sorrows and one day we join him too,he slept and woke up near Jesus,still watching over you,nicely written