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Michael

Dark-skinned boy from Laventille, you caught me by surprise, like a shining sapphire stone spotted at a landfill. Dark-skinned boy from Laventille, friendship was all I wanted until somehow your wizardry weakened my will. The tender touch of your kindness drew me while the scent of your cologne confused me; Without knowing it, you have innocently mastered the art of making love to my mind to capture my heart. So much natural and faultless charm lies in the intelligent twinkle of your dark brown eyes. The pure admiration in your wistful stare seems to echo the emotion of how much I care. Dark-skinned boy from Laventille, a writer I am, but my vocabulary is limited; my words are few. For there are no words that can rightly express how deeply I am in love with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/22/2016 10:42:00 PM
Hi DANIELLE, HOPE YOU COME BACK THIS YEAR..**SKAT**
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Date: 3/11/2014 8:12:00 AM
It is imperative that you post more poems...you've captured my attention with this beautiful work of art! You are talented my dear..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 3/11/2014 4:15:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Danielle :) - I choose your first sweet written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/11/2014 12:00:00 AM
This is very nice and sweet, i love love:) Danielle, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2014 10:38:00 PM
Ah, the capturing of innocence and turning it on its head! Beautifully expressed!
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:16:00 PM
Hi, Danielle, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Danielle Dixon
Date: 3/10/2014 9:59:00 PM
Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs