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Meteors

sky silent velvet black pinpoints of lights from faraway stars rhythmically falling streaking lights across sky sparkling vanishing diamond rock balls exploding star dust glow Fourth Place Winner: Malabika Ray Choudhure: Merse Contest-8/31/21

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Gary Radice

Date: 1/27/2023 11:59:00 AM

What a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2021 4:22:00 PM

what wonderful imagery Frances I love stargazing when we have a clear sky and a meteor shower can be so spectacular:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/2/2021 12:53:00 PM

Dear Frances, your imagery is dazzling and dramatic! I adore falling stars and admire your mastery at capturing them in your celestial poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2021 10:58:00 AM

Frances, you have created an amazing picture of the silence of space and the thunderous movement of "diamond rock balls" exploding into star dust that echo though the galaxy. It is quiet and explosive all at once. Opposites beautifully expressed. Will never look at meteors in quite the same way again! Congratulations for your win. Blessings of wishing stars to you!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2021 12:33:00 AM

Your imagery is certainly "heavenly", Frances! I hope you remembered to make a wish or two :) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/31/2021 7:21:00 PM

An image brought alive with your lovely poem Frances.... Congrats on your win :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/31/2021 4:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your fabulous win. You have made my new form amazing with your golden pen. Love ~ Mala

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/18/2021 7:44:00 PM

They are amazing light shows. God is a pretty good scientist and artist:) Great imagery!