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Metaphoric Flower

To be honest Winter stings And it forever broke my heart, but to tell you the truth I'm addicted to the pain Addicted like a drug addict Winter froze my heart And took away the dandelions for its own pleasure But it forgot one Left it deep in the cave Living with no sun I met it the other day while writing a haiku Last one to leave my Broken heart Alone It tries to glue my life back together But I'm already gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/2/2014 7:14:00 AM
John I feel sadness, literally. This poem is very powerful. Congrats on win.7.Love...Rajat
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John Monteblanco
Date: 12/8/2014 10:18:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/1/2014 9:11:00 AM
Excellent expression of sadness and beauty...congrats on your first place win! Hugs, Rhonda
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John Monteblanco
Date: 12/8/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thanks! It really surprises me how much I've grown as a poet.
Date: 11/28/2014 7:26:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/28/2014 3:21:00 PM
Excellent write, congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:48:00 AM
John, I love this...great poem. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:43:00 AM
An amazing poem though very sad. Congratulations on your win John.
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:21:00 AM
very deep write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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