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Metamorphosis of a Butterfly

Laid as an egg on a leaf by your mother you patiently awaited Nature's magic spell In a few days you became a caterpillar then calmly chewed your way out of the shell You feasted on the leaves as you grew each day shedding your skin when it became too tight Then attached yourself to a safe spot to stay in a self-made cocoon to keep out of sight Safe in the shelter of your silken enclosure you matured to a fully developed pupa Within which the body of the caterpillar was transformed into a glorious winged creature You split the enclosure when the time was right and then crawled into the outside world slowly Your wings expanded and they became bright while the air exposure strengthened your body At last you stood with opened gossamer wings glistening with glorious colours of the rainbow Whose beauty brightens up the surroundings and lifts the human spirit wherever you go

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Date: 8/9/2014 3:58:00 PM
wow John: great description. I wrote one on similar in theme a few years back and chose a Glosa form using one of Emily Dickenson;s poems for the ending lines in each stanza. The title is Butterfly - A Glosa if you ever want to read it, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=466134 Enjoy your weekend
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
This is so beautiful, John! I am glad you drew my attention to this wonderful piece which is full of captivating imagery and lovely details that pulls the reader into the butterfly's story. I find this exceptionally thrilling! Thank you for sharing!
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John Beharry
Date: 8/2/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. I am glad you like it. I enjoyed writing it and going into the technical details even though I feel some may view it as being too technical for poetry. It is all part of the process of Nature anyway, and she is my first love.
Date: 7/15/2014 8:06:00 PM
I have written several poems about butterflies. I love the imagery - this is simply enchanting! Hugs Jan xx
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John Beharry
Date: 7/19/2014 9:27:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. I, also, wrote some other "butterfly" pieces, including one on the "Monarch Butterfly" and some Haiku. I love butterflies for they brighten up our lives. Have a Beautiful day!

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