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Metallic Palette

I taste the metal skyline. I feel the wind breathe across my face I fall Honk, honk, honk The car alarm screams at me from afar Bleeding lights streak across my eyes Hey what's the matter with you? I am fine I think Bedazzled by reflections in sheets of glass Is that the sky? I wonder bemused I fly down and up simultaneously Finally I've caught the wind On steel wings I rise!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/3/2015 10:12:00 PM
Sounds toxic in a way... However I enjoyed
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Date: 6/3/2015 11:41:00 AM
so good to read you again, tim.. what a poetic ride; fly on!.. huggs
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Tim B
Date: 6/3/2015 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Nette, just stopping in with a couple of poems I wrote recently that I felt would be worth sharing. Hope all is well with the soup community.

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