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Messes Up My Coiffure

Ladies of the Soup I bow in your honour You curl up my toes, with images impure My thoughts go askew Bamboozled right through Doing the naughties messes up my coiffure © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/15/2015 7:09:00 PM

Nice one, silly! ( : "My thoughts go askew Bamboozled right through" Love that bit! I'm always amazed with your clever rhyming ^__^ Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/15/2015 10:02:00 PM

You say such sweet things... if you ever stop writing, my life will end up in the dumpster! You are such a darling!!! Love, Jack xxx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/5/2015 12:49:00 AM

Be proud of your coiffure, Jack. I use a shampoo called 'wash & go'. I washed it, and...it went. Darnit. Nice write, regards, Viv

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/5/2015 5:38:00 AM

LOL Made me cackle!!! Almost 80 and still got this luxurious head of gorgeous white hair!!! I've been blessed! LOL

Lynne Llewellyn

Date: 7/4/2015 9:21:00 PM

Okay Jack and Cathie where are you hanging out these days? Let us know and we can visit. Lynne and John

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/4/2015 9:52:00 PM

Do my eyes deceive me??? This can't be Lynne & John from Laural Drive could it??? Who's the poet in the family? You guys just blew me away! We moved to Newmarket just north of Toronto 2 years ago and are living with Scott, my youngest natural born aside from James our youngest adopted son! Where are you, in France? Couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your name on Poetry Soup! Fill me in on what you guys have been up to!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/4/2015 9:52:00 PM

My email is percival86jack@gmail.com We're waiting... Cathie and Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/4/2015 11:36:00 AM

Now LimmerJack... That's Lady Cathie doing that... Having a senior moment? Well, at least those moments are fun... Giggle... LOL.. Hopefully we're encouraging it in a good way... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/4/2015 11:43:00 AM

Actually the upside far outnumbers the downside! Can always go back to the beauty salon! LOL xxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2015 9:19:00 AM

Haha, I had to go back and look at your avatar just now!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/4/2015 11:41:00 AM

LOL That's an old picture... more like Santa these days! Love, Jack xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/4/2015 6:28:00 AM

lol...hmmn...musn't mess it then, Santa :-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/4/2015 11:38:00 AM

Very proud of my silver grey coiffure! LOL Just like the real Santa! LOL Love, Jackson xxx