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Message To Mom

18 years and we still can't see eye to eye and you sit home to ask me why? I feel the need to lie because the truth would make you cry and believe me i try but mama your bird had to fly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/26/2009 2:12:00 PM
Sad poem indeed,,sometimes when we lose someone we know what he was or could be to us,,sad and hearfelt poem indeed--Charma
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:01:00 PM
Another sad but great write Felipe! I forgot to welcome you to the soup! I hope you'll enjoy spending your time and expanding you knowledge of poetry here as much as I have. ~Jen~
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:40:00 PM
Nice rhyme Felipe and welcome to the Soup family.. hope to read more of your poetry.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:01:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Felipe. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:17:00 AM
your poems show talent ,Felipe and gotta go with that flow. keep on writing and flowing within it, my friend and don't forget there is love. - Robert
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