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It’s only that I care for you that you need to This message was a trick Don’t you want me to be happy? This message was hidden. Because I said so, This message was too hard. I wouldn’t ask if This message was a lie Because I love you, that’s why. This message was lost in translation. Why is it the simplest request? And the most heartfelt questions Are often met with rules, stipulation, and manipulations? Only God offers you true love and happiness, He says, “Come to me all who are weary, and I will give you rest.” Message received.

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Date: 11/13/2015 2:52:00 PM
that's just the human flaw....we want be the best they ever saw....vanity is a weapon with the sneakiest of attacks....that's the message that can keep us on track....;)
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Flossie Gierke
Date: 11/13/2015 4:00:00 PM
I really appreciate your comments, you have a very special way of writing. I said it once before, I love your take on things. Quite a gift for words, I admire that!

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