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Message Not Sent

I message you “hi!” You message back, saying “what do you want”. I just tell you, “I love you!” You say “lyt”, and I start overthinking, as I go to bed. I message you when I wake, saying “morning love!” and shut my screen, waiting for your reply. Little do I know, I never get one, because after I hit send, it said “Message not sent”. I try again, it says it again. I realize there’s no point, in trying to message again.

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Date: 12/3/2023 3:00:00 AM
Damn.. two contrasting poems posted today..
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