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Message In a Bottle

I cometh through the sand stones of time Washed ashore before you were born Knowing my voice is silent Though determined to find The one who prevails Through terror reigns Set me free For you Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/10/2015 1:44:00 AM
JUDY, CONGRATS ON YOUR ANY POEM WIN..... ALWAYS & FOREVER ~~LINDA~~
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/10/2015 6:53:00 AM
YO DESTROYER.....thanks Much....
Date: 7/8/2015 10:33:00 AM
Your poem's body and depth of the message is wonderful! ^_^
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 10:39:00 AM
Thanks Teddy kind of you to say so....best...
Date: 7/7/2015 3:50:00 PM
Judy, thank you for supporting "my ANY POEM contest #7." Have a nice day. Love **SKAT**
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
Boot SkAT and Boogie...thank you ....
Date: 5/12/2015 7:11:00 PM
Fascinating and strong lines, beautifully crafted to convey a message and present a nonet form.
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Cynthia appreciate it
Date: 4/26/2015 12:09:00 AM
Judy, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 10:41:00 AM
Looky here...it's Destroyer....thanks for your comment
Date: 4/20/2015 12:56:00 PM
Hi Judy, congratulations on your win for your lovely and interesting mystical poem. Sandra
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Judy Konos
Date: 7/8/2015 10:41:00 AM
Sandra we are missing you big time....let us know how you are...
Date: 4/20/2015 7:46:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:44:00 PM
Maybe our destiny is planned further back than we think... This is a very interesting write. Great work, Judy. Congrats on the win!
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/20/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 4/9/2015 1:50:00 AM
Lovely, Judy. This is a great wrote. Love the form as it brings out that last line so well. Eileen :)
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/20/2015 8:16:00 AM
And thank you too!
Date: 4/8/2015 7:55:00 PM
An interesting write with more than meets the first read I think. Well done. BG
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/20/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Barbara...I am enjoying your poetry big time!
Date: 4/8/2015 7:49:00 PM
Very haunting imagery and tone, but like the form. I've never tried it, but you made it look easy. ~jan
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/20/2015 8:18:00 AM
Try it...You'll run circles around me!
Date: 4/8/2015 7:42:00 PM
I love the form the poem takes Judy not sure if I have attempted it before. :-) i cant explain it but the imagery of the past gave me a little shiver down my spine! Hugs jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 4/20/2015 8:19:00 AM
You shiver! wow.. I'd like to read your shiver poem...wow...gotta be good...

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