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Message In a Bottle

One day along the sandy beach I found a bottle with a message to read Carefully i took it and read on it the words : "Hello out there somewhere My name is Kyle and hopefully you'll smile Even at this silly message" I went home that day A smile on my face Joy in my heart And a Message In A Bottle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/9/2012 11:19:00 AM
I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Anya. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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