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Mermaids

All day he had felt her stirring Under his boat, several times. Surprised at the sundown Shifting and holding the time and air Had brought her to the still surface To sun herself in the last, slow light. Sparkling aqua blue were her fin Adorned with pearls her hairs embraid Wow... it is a beautiful and glorious mermaid He could have got her then, carried her home But knew, to have her alive was only The sounding, casting, waiting, seeing And praying the light not to move. So he released her. Surfing on the waves that quietly glistened The Mermaid thus spoke: “You humans, let me tell you something. Mermaids, sirens, ship wreckers whatever you call us We don’t abandon the sea for love or legs We fling ourselves onto the ground for sound”
+++++++ May 31, 2014 Form: Free Verse

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Date: 8/17/2014 10:30:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:11:00 AM
In my books, this is a certain winner!
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Date: 6/1/2014 10:46:00 PM
Such a true voice of the mermaid.
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Date: 5/31/2014 5:16:00 PM
lovely poem Ram full of romance gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs
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Date: 5/31/2014 5:15:00 PM
lovely poem Ram full of romance gl in contest ty for visiting my page hugs
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Date: 5/31/2014 1:21:00 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, Indeed, "Mermaids" would die if they dwelled on land. They are very much like the sirens described in mythology. I'm so glad he "released her." Wonderful poem, my friend. Wishing you success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:36:00 AM
- I've read several suggestions for this contest, very nice to read your also Dr. Ram. - Good luck in the contest ..... a winning poem in my eyes :)) - Wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/31/2014 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful Dr. Ram ..I love all the meaning..I will see you on the podium....Tim
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Date: 5/31/2014 7:27:00 AM
Could be a winning work..Way to go for the contest..To give up what one really is to be what someone else would want us to be is not good for either one..Great moral..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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