Mermaid Dreams

she is of the earth her home the sea a lively legend born of a sailor's dream so elusive is she some call her pure fantasy alone she dreams far below the sea

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Christine Phillips

Date: 8/15/2013 9:48:00 PM

I enjoy reading your fantasy poem. When I was little I believed in mermaids but not now. Nice poem

Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Date: 8/16/2013 9:08:00 AM

Thank you, Christine. I'm glad you liked it! Faith

April Gabriella

Date: 8/15/2013 1:49:00 PM

Oh I like this! I love the tone and rhyme. Very nice work!

Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Date: 8/16/2013 9:06:00 AM

Thanks so much, April. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Faith

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2013 8:20:00 AM

- Ohh...I like it, Faith !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Date: 8/14/2013 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise :) I'm thrilled you like it! xoxoFaith