Mermaid

Down from the spring board, Through the air, falling free with total peace, Diving down deep under water. Eyes sparkle and shine, To see loads of bubbles around. Swirling and twirling, I pop up from the water. To feel the driving rain, And to see beautiful parrots hover. To be in the water, is such a great fun. A mermaid in a pond, who never wants to return.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2019 6:16:00 AM

Well done indeed; I might have typed this a personification poem, as it seems you ARE the mermaid.

Aditi Sheemar
Date: 7/2/2019 8:21:00 AM

Swimming is so much fun and that too during rainy season:) Thank you very much for appreciating:)

Date: 6/28/2019 11:09:00 PM

A sea woman who chooses Imagination over Fear" Thr is a mermaid in each women " thanx aditi for wonderful lines

Aditi Sheemar
Date: 7/2/2019 8:19:00 AM

Very true:)