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Merits of Nail Varnish

distinctive dates always involve meticulous vital keys important detailed flawlessness considered attires vigilant choice perfected essential final selection striking the hands will reveal red passion portrayed sharply merits seduction by means of nail varnish © September 2013—Kim van Breda

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Date: 9/11/2013 8:45:00 AM
I like your poem. Very imaginative. Warm toughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/10/2013 4:46:00 PM
Love the build up to the ending about the nail polish. Red would be a great color
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Date: 9/9/2013 8:47:00 AM
A Drake Damn is a mark of quality. Well done Kim!
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/9/2013 12:21:00 PM
Really?? I am thus honored...in fact honored to receive all you talented people and your feedback :)
Date: 9/9/2013 8:03:00 AM
The imperfect perfections. Damn, nice job with this!
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/9/2013 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Drake.. off center topic choice with this one-- was feeling bored... so appreciate the feedback.
Date: 9/9/2013 7:30:00 AM
- A good image .... well done, Kim... oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 9/9/2013 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise... feedback from you is always valued. I know you understand this poem from a female perspective too :)

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