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Mentally Decompensated

E_ emotinal outburst M_ mentally decompensated E_ emtionally driven R_ room 21 G_ gurney E_ enter the white coat N_ nurse with pills C_ Cody already passed out asleep Y_ youthful love gone bad R_ restraint bed O_ open door _guards O_ opportunity for change M_ mental health gone bad~tragic (Spent the day at the emergency room with Cody..They sent him to a crisis center...Here we go again with mental health visits and pills..)

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Date: 6/22/2011 2:34:00 PM
You must be a tough cookie Sarah, hang on in there, i will be asking for you and Cody..
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Date: 6/20/2011 7:17:00 PM
Sorry to know this Sara.Hope Cody is better now.Very effectively you have expressed the agony of your mind here.
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:23:00 PM
aww sorry sara chin up things will be ok love cory this was a great piece!!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 2:11:00 PM
Hon, I'm so sorry you're going through all of this now. I hope Cody gets the help he needs to handle his recent loss. My stepbrother's son committed suicide on Christmas Eve when his girlfriend broke up with him. At least you were able to get Cody to the hospital in time to save his life. Blessings and peace, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:19:00 AM
Sounds awful! I'm so sorry to hear of this and know it's true. I wish you much fortitude and hope for better days.
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Date: 6/20/2011 2:19:00 AM
i feel with you in this one, sara... such deep poetry; keep your chin up as prayers continue.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:15:00 PM
sorry to hear that about cody
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:56:00 AM
yes Sara sorry to hear about Cory, I will pray for cory, hope everything turns out ok. it does help to write about it to let others know like you have done so we all can pray for you and cory.
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:02:00 PM
Sad Sara. My prayers for Cory. May he get well soon.
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:56:00 PM
oh so sorry to hear about this Sara my friend.. will put Cody on our prayer line again..luv.. a wonderful Acrostic with descriptive issues on this subject luv..
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:50:00 PM
sara, I can so relate to this. It's happened to me with my hubbie and his severe anxiety, though never to the point of him having to go to the hospital,but I've been many times to ER for his asthma problems and him not able to breathe, and I have others close to me with problems of emotional outburst. It is indeed tragic when also coupled with other diseases. Some people just have it much worse than others and life seems so unfair to me sometimes. U R like me, writing your pain out thru poetry.
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:24:00 PM
I am grieved to hear the news , sara
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:22:00 PM
oh deer how sad but never bad , the white coats are awaiting, dodge n sidestep lad, great verse no debating:) xo, Don
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:02:00 PM
Ouch!! The very best to both you and Cody, Sara. You're in my thoughts. <3<3<3
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