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Mental Tattoo: a Collaboration With Eileen Manassian

I breathe in the fragrance of you; You're the rose of a new tattoo. Fashioned firm and fair in kind, Never will you leave my mind. On your heart I am meant to stay; My love for you is on display. I'm a rose in passion's hue; Symbol of love touching you. ©2013 Honestly JT ©2013 Jade Celeste

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/16/2013 2:21:00 PM

PJ and Eileen....this is so beautiful! You described love perfectly. Hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/2/2013 11:10:00 PM

Justice.........LOVED working with you! :) Thanks for asking me to work on this lovely piece. :) I'm honored. Hugs

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/2/2013 7:44:00 PM

great flow with this one wonderful expression of love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2013 5:31:00 PM

a mental tattoo like that one will not so easily fade!! NIcely done, you two . I hope you can also do another Balsic stanza (whatever it is called) It is difficult to do one and not seem trite because the syllable count is so limiting. I am not completely satisfied with mine either.