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Mental Block

I. control plus a, delete - ink on the keyboard. II. nothing to write; i press too harddddd. III. a cursor betwen a window and space - mental block.

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Date: 1/16/2016 4:31:00 PM
Arch, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT **
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:36:00 AM
Great American Haiku.
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Date: 6/23/2009 2:26:00 PM
TRUTH!!!
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Date: 6/10/2009 7:49:00 PM
What a relevant series! And true to its form!
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Date: 6/10/2009 7:05:00 PM
I have more of these than I care to admit. Oh did I just say that out loud!-AA:))
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:17:00 PM
ok my friend haiku lesson #1 it has to be about NATURE, it is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of 17 moras (or on), in three metrical phrases of 5, 7, and 5 moras respectively[1]. Haiku typically contain a kigo, or seasonal reference, and a kireji or verbal caesura. A haiku in English usually appears in three lines. The above work is still a good effort but not a haiku ;) Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2009 11:10:00 AM
Very creative piece on being mentally block to write..good work.
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