Men's Lies

Men make promises they tend not to keep and Naiive girls smile bearing forth their fragile hearts waiting for their time to come when they will fall in love and MEN will admire your beauty present you with compliments. Such Surface trivialities Words are after said and done Meaningless And actions without the Most modest Intentions Are still lies. and With Kisses so empty I choke on the absense of truths. I am done with mens Lies.

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John Rhinem

Date: 11/26/2008 8:07:00 PM

Well, I am very glad that I do not lie! "Hello Precious Laura Hew!"~I am sorry that it seemed to take so long to get back to you dear lady~Its only been a weel, yet it seems as though it has been a month? I like your writing style dear~Somewhat unique it seems! And, it flows well, straight from your heart & soul I believe~And, it was so nice to hear from you dear~For I have noticed you before! On we go...."Love, John!"~