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Memory Pond

I lie down closing my brown eyes I take a stone and throw it in the ripples slowly now arise my past touching me deep within I take a stone and throw it in I watch the past gently unfold my past touching me deep within I dream of something I can hold I watch the past gently unfold my golden moments soft and sweet I dream of something I can hold I need to keep this kind repeat my golden moments soft and sweet life ripples hold the past and dies I need to keep this kind repeat I lie down closing my brown eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/4/2016 4:33:00 PM
Well?? I'm waiting for whatever was up your sleeve James.
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Date: 10/31/2016 2:25:00 AM
I will sleep with it beneath my pillow James. It's not still beating is it? That would keep me awake I'm afraid.
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Date: 10/29/2016 2:05:00 PM
You have just given me some "golden moments, soft and sweet" James. Your heart in the post yet??
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Jean Murray
Date: 10/31/2016 2:26:00 AM
I will sleep with it beneath my pillow James. It's not still beating is it? That would keep me awake I'm afraid.
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Just James
Date: 10/30/2016 11:53:00 PM
I so glad you enjoyed it ...its in the mail!
Date: 10/26/2016 1:45:00 AM
A nicely penned pantoum, James. Or should i say good memories and a reverie in a moment? Nice to see you writing again. ;)
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Just James
Date: 10/26/2016 2:46:00 AM
Thank you "Flower" did you notice how the Pantoum ripples?

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