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Memory Lane

Take a walk today down memories lane what is it that you remember the most is it the childhood memories of Spain maybe the first time you went to the coast into the waves you ran without a care dancing and tumbling you played carelessly drifting out to sea you had a big scare when saved your mother grasped you tightly or could it be the day you fell in love all starry eyed remembering that kiss like a shooting star falling from above never had experienced such bliss memories last a lifetime don't fade reminiscences can not be remade written 05/19/2013

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Date: 7/8/2015 4:50:00 PM
Great sonnet.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/8/2015 8:43:00 PM
ty Vince it was the first one I wrote hugs
Date: 5/22/2015 10:01:00 PM
I love that Memory Lane. Here is another oldie but goodie I had not seen yet!
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:18:00 PM
Shadow, this is has a pleasant flow and the verses show that you are well written... Good work... Verlena
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/22/2014 4:04:00 AM
this was my 1st sonnet I used to tear out my hair trying to rhyme words if it had not been for MM (Mostapha) I would have given up he encouraged me saying it gets easier he was right ty for enjoying it hugs
Date: 6/13/2013 5:47:00 PM
Lovely piece! congrats kim
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/14/2013 7:37:00 AM
hi Kim ty for liking it and for running contest also ty for placing it Shadow x
Date: 5/24/2013 6:31:00 PM
Sweet reverie.... How precious the memories. Well done... Jake
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/25/2013 4:28:00 AM
hi Jake memories are very precious and individual ty Linda
Date: 5/19/2013 7:30:00 PM
This is definitely true. I enjoyed reading this one - JH
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/25/2013 4:26:00 AM
ty JH nice to know you like it Linda

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