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Memory

Cease being my memory, you deserve not the pain of this thankless ordeal; on the blurry lengthening scroll of my mind you sweat to splash the frozen ink trapped in the rusty pen of my fleeing yesteryears. Flung into the present a maze cocoons me, beneath your urging voice myriad trails do i see, a flash of recognition for a triumphant moment then a hollow and dark aftermath, from my vacant head slowly you ebb away, from my unmoving lips a whisper follows you- Will i ever wake up?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2010 3:35:00 AM
really sad.emotions are well expressed.i like the second line of your poem very much..reading the first half i felt the man is dead, while reading the second i felt he`s still alive but unable to get up,am not sure.well penned.
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