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Hey. How's it going, with your life? I know mine just keeps on falling apart. What do I see? Can it be?! Oh, wait who are you again? My memory has faded away. My eyes can't see anything clearly 'cause of this fog inside my head. Why can't I just move along? Is it because of your smile, your hair, or the way you dance? I can't tell anymore! Hey, wait a second! You look like that girl from.... no forget it I forgot. Don't stare I've only known you for seven seconds! But for some reason I feel a deep warmth inside. Can it be that I've seen you before in my life? ...No, it can't be! What's going on in my life? I just can't seem to get on the right track. Everyday is another mistake, I just wanna escape this world & manipulate all those around me. I feel like a freak,now I know how Jason or Freddy must have felt. Entry for " Why oh Why" Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet Written March 16,2010 Written by John Monteblanco

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Date: 10/19/2010 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:15:00 PM
This almost sounds like the person is love struck. Whatever you wrote this I like that as a reader I felt like you were speaking to me. I like that feeling of getting enveloped by someone's written word. Congratulations on getting a win.
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:21:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:09:00 AM
Many congratulations John on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest John ;)
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, John
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:04:00 AM
Congratulation, John, on your placement in my contest, Why Oh Why~~
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:54:00 PM
Congrats John on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry luv.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight ...
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, john. WAs this really about what Charles said here below? I didn't get it that way! luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:15:00 PM
John these are exactly some of the things that confuse our older population aflicted with alzheimers. Good write. Charles
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