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Memories With You

When the call came that you weren't well, I didn't want it to be your final farewell. I cried for hours because I wasn't there. My heart just wasn't at all prepared. So I prayed, and Yes, received a reply, "It's not up to you, you need to comply". So, it's OK, God's calling you home To eternity in heaven you belong. It's a difficult time to say just when Your situation will be the final win. Angels have gathered around your bed Awaiting their command to go ahead. Maw maw, I'll miss your unique love. I'm always proud to be a part of Memories with you, I'm so blessed. Even now as you lay to rest.

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Date: 12/3/2014 8:53:00 PM
such a beautiful tribute Brenda a poem to be proud of hugs 7
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:32:00 PM
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Date: 7/7/2011 6:16:00 PM
passionate expressions on the feelings of love, Brenda
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Brenda Peterson
Date: 7/7/2011 9:52:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 7/7/2011 4:34:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brenda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Brenda Peterson
Date: 7/7/2011 9:53:00 PM
~Thank you carol~
Date: 7/6/2011 9:38:00 PM
Crying..I know how you feel...very well written.. I love the verse "Angels have gathered around your bed Awaiting their command to go ahead"...
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Brenda Peterson
Date: 7/7/2011 9:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Juanita...
Date: 7/6/2011 8:32:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share amazing creative poetry with luv..
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Brenda Peterson
Date: 7/7/2011 9:55:00 PM
Thank You...

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