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Memories Thrown Asunder

I remember the very first time I let my eyes rest upon your saint looks, As I gazed upon your angelic smile I felt one breath away from heaven. For that very moment that we were holding each other in our arms, It felt as if life’s long dark road seemed to be getting shorter and brighter. After we parted ways I felt a void in my heart, it felt as if god had taken my heart and gave it to you, After that day I feel the sudden urge to seek refuge in your heavenly hugs, When I see your gorgeous smile it feels as if god forgot to give me my heart back, You take away my breath every time I see you, I feel as if I'm a soldier brought to attention at your very presence. After that first week being with you I felt on top of the world, I never wanted you to leave my sight, i just wanted to hold you forever. But like all good things must come to a brief end. To be carried on through out the days passing by, You made them days count, you were the one that took my heart Now it is yours to treasure. it will be intwined with your heartbeat two beating, as one. the lifeforce of us two will keep me strong, Throughout the dark day's in life, i am no longer walking the road, im running it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/24/2010 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for the comments guy's, remember to comment after each read thankyou, open to critics.
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aiden. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2010 1:57:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more on this my wedding day..luv..
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:15:00 AM
This is well written. I can feel the emotion injected into the words that make them come alive.
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:04:00 AM
Very sweet write of the heart...keep the pen flowing...love is a great inspiration to write..Michael
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