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Memories Tableau

Ivory keys are old and damaged now, years of memories locked within their depth, fingers now gnarled once drew melodic sounds Penned Oct 31 2017 using visual 1 Verified by how many syllables.com. ...Totals: 5.5.5.5.5.5.syllables

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2017 6:50:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Seren, glad we are now on the same timezone lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2017 3:47:00 PM

pensive poem well done, serene.. congrats on your win and thanks for participating.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2017 8:20:00 PM

Beautiful, Seren, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2017 2:58:00 PM

This is really nice, Seren. I love how you painted the scene. Congrats for your win.

John Michaels

Date: 11/6/2017 2:08:00 PM

Lovely write, Seren. "Gnarled" is such an evocative word! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/31/2017 9:20:00 PM

Excellent poem Seren...I like the form

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/31/2017 9:08:00 PM

Very beautiful and creative Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/31/2017 9:16:00 PM

thank you my friend....Seren

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/31/2017 7:42:00 PM

Your imagery is very beautifully expressed Seren. Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2017 4:21:00 AM

I'm glad you didn't post a picture for this poem your vivid imagery is superb and I can picture it so clearly in my minds eye. I think we are on different time zones to Wales, we turned the clock back and hour - you've leapt forward one day lol lol:-) Happy Halloweeeeen xxx hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/31/2017 5:43:00 AM

Haha I realised and came back to alter it. Glad you liked it. Yes I thought pic would take the visual part in my words away.....thanks...Seren