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Memories On the Breeze

I am lying in a sunlit field of clover chewing on a blade of grass. The sweet sap brings forth memories of love, as it used to be. Gentle touch of the summer wind flitting across my bare back like a lovers kiss, feathery, enticing, sending shudders of delight through my veins As quickly as love awoke my soul it is crushed by words of goodbye All I have left are memories on the breeze tearing my soul apart. So I lie here, heart full of thoughts looking for the sign that your near. A butterfly lands upon my arm it's soft caress telling me You're here, forever at my side ...... Penned 25/01/2018 2....Memories on the Breeze Contest organised by..Joseph May named One in Five

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Date: 5/24/2018 11:28:00 PM
touched deeply!
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Date: 2/18/2018 8:12:00 PM
awesome win :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 5:33:00 PM
sensitive and visual write, deserving of the honor given! Congrats! Will visit you. bbn
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:07:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Seren - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Seren.
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Date: 2/7/2018 9:17:00 AM
I enjoyed this beautiful poem. Congratulations for your win! :)
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Date: 1/26/2018 7:03:00 PM
Very beautiful sad, romantic poem, loved the flow.
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:46:00 AM
I relate to this more than I'll share here. This very much hit home for me. Thank you for this!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2018 9:57:00 AM
hello Drake..hope I didn't upset you..thank you for commenting..Seren
Date: 1/25/2018 6:33:00 AM
Simply beautiful Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2018 9:57:00 AM
Tim hi...glad you liked it...Seren
Date: 1/25/2018 6:01:00 AM
A gently moving, delightful poem..a joy to read..best for a win, Seren.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/25/2018 10:00:00 AM
Vijay..How kind of you to comment so..Thank you...Seren

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