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I cannot brush away tiny grains of sand as the waves can reclaim them for the sea, nor sweep clean my memories of a man, as if love we had was not meant to be. A mystery it is to those who are questioning the moon for ruling the tide. After years of passion, now a tug of war. His spoils of battle are tears I can't hide. In weak moments, I drift in reveries of walks on this beach, of holding his hand, time spent in laughter; loving memories. He threw us away, I don't understand. Footsteps leave prints, washed out by ebb and flow. I cry in vain, caught in love's undertow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/29/2016 9:14:00 AM
I would have made many albums with this kind of memories, but you know what? i prefer to elope with a taste of chocolate, atleast that won't make me look sober, lol....excellent write Lin, many this has happened to, many this has been done to, you have one heart there, and it's great!
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Date: 1/29/2016 11:07:00 AM
hmmmm how poetic are your words, 'elope with a taste of chocolate" Thanks for all of your wonderful comments...they are appreciated so much.
Date: 1/29/2016 6:54:00 AM
Passion, and a beautiful type of melancholy. Many thanks for sharing, Lin!
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Date: 1/29/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Michael. I'm pleased that you like it.
Date: 1/28/2016 11:37:00 PM
A Sonnet Masterpiece dear Lin. Sincerely, Elaine George
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Date: 1/29/2016 4:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine.
Date: 1/28/2016 6:45:00 PM
Hi Lin, this is one beautiful poem, I absolutely love sonnets, ah! memories, thank you so much for the read my friend, take care.......Vera
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:00:00 PM
Hi, Vera, and thank you for such lovely comments.

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