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Memories Lurk

memories lurk beneath the pale, behind the brow of sorrow, too many hurts, the thoughts impale, of lives in tempest and death grow stale, lest, remembered, some tomorrow.... well known beyond the veil, which no one else can borrow, some try to no avail, tomorrow yet tomorrow..... At 4 years i told my mum i drowned at sea, and the sharks were there??? Don re: "Hollow Bones" Debbie Duncan

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Date: 10/8/2013 7:43:00 PM
Don, this is creative, unique, interesting and imaginative. You take the reader on journey of your mind. Nice job
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:42:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2013 5:34:00 PM
Oh, Don you take my words and write a much better rhyme ,,, (like spanky on the little rascals says" why I oughta ;} P>S. do you go swimming in that deep blue sea ;} do you know it's shark week in the USA ;}
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