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Memories Beyond the Door

I am sure the verse of fear in writing Extreme sense of sadness lies in my dreams Memories seem to be locked deep inside I cry for the loss of my tender scenes My heartfelt dreams, those of powerful love Are also tucked away beyond any hope Any hope of getting them for feeling Making me try to understand and cope Pain’s so intense that I can’t remember The joys of life are gone with this disease My longtime memories are gone, I hurt I feel real terrible, it brought a tease I’ll never know the sure pleasures of life Like others who can see their past at will They’re lucky, even with bad memories All are hope for the future, loving still
Entered into Constance La France's "Memories Beyond The Door" contest 4/28/2013

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Date: 5/10/2013 3:33:00 PM
Russell congratulations on your win. Well deserved my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! So heartbreaking. I really liked it. :)
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Date: 5/10/2013 1:37:00 AM
Many congrats dear Russell for this lovely win.
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:25:00 PM
great entry for the contest Russel, congrats on your win
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:38:00 PM
Wow this is sad Russel hopefully it is not for real that you lost your memories even sad memories is beautiful as well to be remember, wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, Yanny
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:22:00 PM
This is an awesome poem about this sad disease..if..I read it right....its a beautiful poem Russell...congratulations
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Date: 5/9/2013 5:00:00 PM
I hope you have really not lost your long time memories. Sometimes they are all we have. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:01:00 PM
Congrats Russell on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/9/2013 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations Russell. Very well deserved. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem on the theme of the contest Russell.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for commenting on my page.
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:16:00 PM
you break me, russell.. a sentimental piece deeply moving the heart... rhyme becomes you!.. thanks for acknowledging my piece for your contest; much delighted!... :) huggs
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:00:00 PM
Well done Russell... I like it all. ~A.O
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:40:00 PM
Hi Russell, Constance will love this poem. I think she has a good taste for this kind of imagery, as so do I. I don't envy those who can see pass their will. I like having faded memories of my past. a very deep write. Good luck in the contest ~LINDA
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