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Memories Beyond the Door

Talking to him was like a high Then I'd crash and burn with a cry I'd eat you, breathe, and sleep But the darkened memory of you I keep The memory of you is seared in my mind And peace I cannot find Even now, after all this time The burden of it is mine It was a dangerous rush And for a while, I'd dare to touch And yet I kept coming back Because I thought it was something I lack My love for him was raw, real, And unlike anything I thought I could feel I was addicted and out of control Couldn't get out, even when I wanted to fold Going at high velocity, no surprise I fell when it ended, so abruptly Like a broken bone it's mending, but will never be the same The pain will go too, Till all I have left... Is the memory of you 3-21-13

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Date: 5/12/2013 11:31:00 PM
This seems too genuine to be made up (most of what I write about when it comes to love is just imagination, anyhow). I don't know what it's like to be "infatuated" with someone to the point you aren't even acting like yourself anymore... but your words take me there. Congrats on your win, my friend!
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/13/2013 8:53:00 AM
*cough* that's perhaps *cough* because it wasn't made up *cough* (Getting a cold here, maybe...) Well you know, for not really experiencing love you do a pretty good job of writing about it! Love is a crazy thing. Keeping your emotions in check is hard when you've fallen that deeply. Thanks so much! :D Appreciate the comments!
Date: 5/12/2013 3:43:00 PM
Caleah, sad , it is hard to fall. and still we do... sadder when all we have are memories that keep us broke... a painful thought.. thank you for sharing... LINDA
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/13/2013 9:00:00 AM
It sure is! It's painful thinking of them, everyday it gets easier but is always there... Thanks so much for commenting!!
Date: 5/11/2013 7:57:00 AM
Liked this. Congratulations on your win, Caleah.-Red
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/13/2013 8:50:00 AM
Thank you!! :)
Date: 5/10/2013 6:31:00 PM
Wow! This is very good, I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so much!! :D
Date: 5/10/2013 5:45:00 PM
well deserved win here.thanks for stopping by.take care
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/12/2013 12:47:00 PM
No problem!! Anytime! Thank you! :)
Date: 5/10/2013 3:52:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Caleah
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:28:00 PM
great entry Caleah, congrats on your win
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:25:00 PM
Very heartfelt poem..intense..congratulations
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Date: 5/9/2013 3:05:00 PM
Life is a series of lessons. I think this wa a tough one for you. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:00:00 PM
Now you deserves it and you've won. Great Job Caleah! Many Congrats to you.
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/10/2013 10:55:00 AM
AWWWW! Thank you!!! :D
Date: 5/7/2013 10:30:00 AM
Intense emotions expressed here.. I really enjoyed reading this one..glad I was able to stop by. Will be reading more of your work..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:38:00 AM
Been there. This raw & intense piece had my heartstrings being pulled all over the place. Excellent job!
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:50:00 AM
This is really a touching piece, Caleah... I wish you luck in the contest~A.O
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Caleah Buil
Date: 5/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much! Whoever wins I know will deserve it! :)
Date: 3/22/2013 12:55:00 PM
- A touching poem, but life goes on and there are always new chances - Well written Caleah ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2013 1:45:00 PM
Read some of my poetry, if you wish - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Caleah Buil
Date: 3/24/2013 9:22:00 PM
Yes definitely! I'm learning... Once bitten twice shy. Thank you. :)
Date: 3/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
Caleah, we all get hurt like this...we learn to shield our hearts better. Don't give up on a real love... great poem..Donna
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Caleah Buil
Date: 3/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
Thank you. :) It is a tough transition, but I know one day I'll find the right one. I won't give up! :)

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