Memories

Memories of past hold fast in my heavy heart. Weight of losing you. 09/06/2016

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Date: 9/4/2017 2:38:00 PM

The pain and ache of losing a loved one is well projected in these words, Jean. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Jean Murray
Date: 9/4/2017 2:47:00 PM

Hello Paul. Lovely to see you. Thank you for your visit.

Date: 9/3/2017 12:03:00 PM

- Jean, congratulations on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 9/3/2017 2:31:00 PM

Thank you. I love your entry as well Sunshine.

Date: 9/3/2017 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations Jean ! :)

Jean Murray
Date: 9/3/2017 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. Same to you.

Date: 6/9/2016 3:16:00 PM

Beautiful but sad jean i would classify this as a senryu rather than a haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 6/9/2016 3:22:00 PM

Done Jan. Thank you. I am learning something new every day. It's great!

Date: 6/9/2016 9:07:00 AM

wonderfully crafted Jean, hauntingly sad words.

Jean Murray
Date: 6/9/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thank you Lenny.

Date: 6/9/2016 6:27:00 AM

A heavy heart and memories that never leave. A very nice haiku!

Jean Murray
Date: 6/9/2016 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Robert. I rarely do these.