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In a corner of a pleasant wood Shimmering with sparkling waters stood A languid pond, resplendent in the daylight - It shimmered to the light, unmindful of my plight. While I here reminisce, wanting to go back- To be once more charmed by what I lack. But I cannot go back, for there someone Had built a wall so tall I’m undone. The past and the present cannot meet I cannot go back or my memories greet I must sit here and write to dreams goodbye and end my days upon a sigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/6/2013 10:41:00 AM
rarely does nature have such a prominent piece and oh, i bemoan that wall... a lively piece, thks
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:57:00 PM
a nice poem...pd
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Date: 8/13/2012 7:11:00 PM
wow, I think this one is incredibly good, Sherese. A FAVE.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/13/2012 7:21:00 PM
I thank you for this comment. It means a lot.
Date: 7/18/2012 12:23:00 PM
Memories are to be treasured I say.. Enjoyed your write tonight Sherese :)
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/21/2012 10:11:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment. Glad you did. Please stop by any time. Will enjoy reading your poems, I'm sure.
Date: 7/16/2012 11:26:00 AM
Picturesque images of a sylvan pond and your introspection.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/13/2012 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Joan, for your nice comment.
Date: 7/14/2012 9:31:00 PM
I will sit here and smile at great memories gone by,reading your poem,ending my night on a high,lol,good night Sherese
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/13/2012 7:19:00 PM
Hey Rich, belated thanks.
Date: 7/14/2012 6:42:00 PM
Wow!! So beautiful a write Sherese...the whole poem is lovely, but from the seventh line to the end really got me, as I can soooo relate to this. Hope to read more of you. One love. Joy Wells.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/14/2012 9:25:00 PM
Thanks Joy. Glad this made a difference in your day.
Date: 7/14/2012 4:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Sometimes when one gets old or has a form of dementia, it probably seems as if they have a high wall blocking out all good memories..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/14/2012 9:27:00 PM
Really appreciate you taking time to read my poetry. Enjoy your weekend.
Date: 7/14/2012 2:37:00 PM
I love the serenity of the reminisce...nice write...hugs...Joseph
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/14/2012 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Joseph. To you too.
Date: 7/14/2012 12:49:00 PM
Happy weekend to you Sherese. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/14/2012 1:18:00 PM
Happy weekend to you too Carol. Thanks for reading and thanks for sharing, and the warm welcome to the community.
Date: 7/14/2012 12:27:00 PM
Very very good write. So much I relate to it... Always Michael
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 7/14/2012 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Michael. Please stop by again. Appreciated.

Book: Shattered Sighs