Memories

Living memories phantasies of silent desire winds of golden hope

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Cesar Cantu

Date: 10/28/2009 3:20:00 PM

Indeed memory is somehow one of the few representations of an existing past or at least in a sense of the whole concept of existing; I remembered something I read today "if you control the past, you control the present....and since the past only exists in memory and printed records, which we control..." well, the rest is obvious @.@ thanks for the experience =D

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 5:40:00 AM

What a downright beautiful Haiku Gert. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2009 4:54:00 AM

Beautifully written. Memories and hope. I love the two. Keep writing. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2009 7:38:00 PM

Ah, yes, Gert. Such memories that ride on the "winds of golden hope" give our lives special meaning. What a beautiful senryu! To my faves this one goes. Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/30/2009 7:02:00 PM

Hi Gert A lovely thought! A wonderful Senryu. Love the line, Living memories...Keep writing so we can keep reading! Love Light Truth Patricia

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/30/2009 5:23:00 PM

nicely penned, nice senryu