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Memories

They are in the woodwork of my mind framed memories fixed, nailed in time. My father is there, silent as wood. I sought to know him, but never could. Mother’s presence splinters the air I hear her still, voice cobbled in care. Older sisters emerge, a polished veneer whispering what others won’t go near. An older oak-stout brother appears he ingrained me with nightmarish fears. Best memories end a blossomed tree when a surprise baby brother comes to be.

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/22/2022 6:51:00 PM

I'm in complete awe, with how you describe members of your family. This thought is beautiful. "Best memories end a blossomed tree." Of course, not all memories are wonderful, but they are a part of you. Your words caress softly around my heart. I am so thankful that you are here, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. Hugs and love, Brandy

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/23/2022 5:27:00 AM

Oh, Brandy, thank you. Please know how much words from you mean to me. You have always been my hero. I shudder to think of a life without you. . .without your sweet, guiding influence and incredible talent. Hugs & Love, Paul

Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/16/2021 7:04:00 PM

How delightful! Memories true and cherished. I have so many. This is a lovely, heartfelt poem.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/21/2021 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara. It's kind and thoughtful of you to comment. As the curtain begins to close on mortality, memories are virtually all we have left. Hugs, Paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/6/2021 8:41:00 PM

Love the sustained metaphor here, Paul. May the family tree's branches continue to flourish, nourished by deep roots! Wonderful write! Peace and Tranquility

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/11/2021 9:07:00 PM

I'm grateful. Gershon, for your kind and on-the-mark comment. You excel at, among other things, message analysis. Paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2021 7:59:00 PM

A range of familial emotions here. Congratulations on POTD!

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/17/2021 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your thoughtfulness and and kindness in commenting. Hugs, Paul

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/27/2021 7:37:00 PM

Love this!! Awesome thoughts! God bless you. With love, Gina

Paul Schneiter
Date: 6/5/2021 7:12:00 PM

Gina, you are so very kind. Please know of my gratitude. Hugs and love, Paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/12/2021 5:25:00 PM

Hello Paul ... a beaut rhythm in your poem and yes, as we grow older memories still remain - thanks again Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/13/2021 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Lindsay, my dear, ever-supportive friend. We don't like to think about it, but into each life comes a day when memories are all a person has. We should so live that we have an inventory of positive memories. Hugs, Paul