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Memorable Walk In the Mountains

When I think about those mountains I see you hiking with passion Holding my hand Ready to fall in my arms when you stumble I see us alone in the world Touching the clouds together Holding each other Trusting each other The wind blowing by Making me feel your heart beat As our minds sink For each other Though the thought of letting you go Sinks in At the center of this aromatic feeling I feel like running away Because I am cut deep by another man’s angel But I can't control the feeling within That wants me to hold on still So I reach out and K……… This is because I have no clue On how I should let you go What is it that you do? That's making me love you so… Maybe loving you is a mistake Maybe it’s not Maybe I can just dream for a while… So I decide to carry you on my back Down the mountains Just after the sunset Then I start to wonder Whether you feel the same Whether you think of me Whether you silently call my name Whether you see what I see Then I look at your smile That smile turns on my world I hold you to myself and slope down In silence With many question at this heart of mine Does she care? Does she even know? Will she always be there? Will she let me go? Can she love me back? If tell her my past story Would she take all the pain away? If for any reason she never loves me Would I still want her to stay? But I remember you glow like the light of the harvest moon soft golden rays to fill my starry heart My love for you is way too strong For me to simply forget Especially with this memorable walk on the mountain Your love is the one thing I shan't regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/24/2014 5:26:00 PM
It's Free Verse my friend and very enjoyable fav lines [you glow like the light of the harvest moon soft golden rays to fill my starry heart] You can always use the term Verse it can never be wrong ;) Light & Love
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Muhereza Rodgers Roger
Date: 6/25/2014 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Debbie for such inspiring words...I am glad that you loved this one
Date: 6/20/2014 10:46:00 AM
Love can be so bittersweet. You convey this beautifully as this poem reveals your romantic soul. A very lovely poem!
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Muhereza Rodgers Roger
Date: 6/25/2014 12:29:00 AM
Thanks Connie for such a better assessment to this poem, I love your work too
Date: 6/19/2014 6:54:00 AM
You write with so much passion Rodger, I love how you write.....sad too, don't we all go through a phase like that....xx
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Muhereza Rodgers Roger
Date: 6/25/2014 12:36:00 AM
Thanks herzel indeed we all go through this, at one point we all pupate
Date: 6/13/2014 12:43:00 PM
AHHHHH what beauty you write... what a glorious love but sad too.. I hope she stays for you... your love sounds wonderful... you write awesome.. I can feel your love in each word.. hugs to you Brooke
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Muhereza Rodgers Roger
Date: 6/25/2014 12:38:00 AM
I feel you here Brooke, thanks for being the first to line out sweet words that shine light for me to do even better..hugs indeed

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