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Memorable Vacations

Memorable Vacations Queensland was a dream come true, Along forest lake walks under the blue, Summers of December 2010 on my sis' invite, Excited we were for the double delight, Long travel concluded into a toast, Beaches and sea, Byron bay and Gold Coast, Gold of sand slipped under our feet, Glittered in sun the irresistible greet, Waves that thrashed on us with every tide, Engulfed us after a roller coaster ride, Kangaroos that into every street hopped, To give them way every now and then we stopped, People were humble and kind, Serpentine roads turning blind, Sunny day we visited famous sea world, Dolphins with music in unison twirled, Kids together on giant wheel screamed, Watched favourite movies and gleamed, Train travel and beauty of countryside, River Brisbane traversed with ferry ride, Sydney opera house, bridge and harbour, New year eve with fireworks and great fervor, Days of goodbye when approached near, Subtle emotions flowed and rolled the tears, As we close our eyes and reminisce, Days spent together were such a bliss ! Written May 7th , 2015 For Shadow Hamilton's contest First place win Now entered for contest "Any old poem#5 " by SKAT A Entered for "Landscape and towns" contest by Bic Gi-Sa

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Date: 7/10/2015 1:09:00 PM
Congs too dear on wining this contest Loved this one
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Date: 7/5/2015 4:02:00 PM
Such a memorable holiday, Upma!! Congrats on your fine win. I have many friends in Australia, and they're always urging me to go, but a 24 hr flight is a bit daunting for me! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:35:00 PM
Thnx for visit and sweet words Paul! U must visit once n see kangaroos running on the roads n irresistible desire to chase them,, wonderful place!
Date: 7/5/2015 3:12:00 AM
Dr Umpa, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/6/2015 11:32:00 PM
Thnx PD!
Date: 7/4/2015 7:45:00 PM
Dr Upma :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 12:09:00 AM
Thnx dear Skat, so glad that u liked this one!
Date: 5/11/2015 12:21:00 AM
Add my congratulations to your great win...... hugs ...archana
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:34:00 PM
Dr Upma, Like a dream you shared. Love it..... Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:50:00 PM
Dr Upma, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2015 8:15:00 PM
What a lovely vacation this was, Dr. Upma. And your couplet poem presents the imagery and details so well. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:12:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 5:46:00 PM
so enjoyable Dr Upma congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:57:00 AM
Very well written
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:26:00 AM
In the Future: Do not attempt to have such a marvelous time without telling us when you are going and where we can be expected to catch up with you! No indeed..."YA AIN'T LEAVING WITHOUT US!" SAVVY?
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:17:00 AM
I would love to visit one day both Australia and New Zealand - great descriptive write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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