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Memento of Waters

Gently gurgling waves of water Slip, trip and twirl while dressed Sky blue; Transfixed I soaked, fly in amber Moment in time impressed With hue. Note:fly in amber -noun; reminder of the past Your Best Poem #2 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 11 March 2015

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/30/2015 1:42:00 PM

This is so amazingly lovely! Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Kim! Have a nice day! Pandita

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/27/2015 8:55:00 PM

Hi dear.. Congratulations on your high placement in Shadow's contest !!! :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/27/2015 12:12:00 PM

Not only have a read an elegant and beautifully written verse but have learned something new in the process (fly in amber) Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order my friend -------------PS: Go directly to my fav poets list, do NOT pass go...

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2015 11:42:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your 1st place win :-)Alexis

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/26/2015 11:14:00 PM

Great pen! congrats on top place win Kim!

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:24:00 PM

Kim, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2015 3:41:00 PM

congrats on 1st place Kim with this delight and refreshing poem hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 3:41:00 PM

Dropping back again with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 4/23/2015 1:45:00 AM

Congratulations!!! This is fantastic dear lovely Kim! Can't believe I missed this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 10:19:00 PM

very nice and good to see it! Congrats for your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2015 1:41:00 PM

Congrats!!Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2015 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win,Kim, beautiful written.A 7 Blessings and hugs Eve

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2015 9:32:00 AM

This is done so beautifully ! Congrats on your wonderful win !!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/27/2015 12:15:00 AM

Congrats on your first place win, Kim! I'm honored to share the spot with you...just saw your reply below. I'm feeling much better this week. Thanks for asking...you're so sweet...hugs, Rhonda

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 7:20:00 AM

Thank you for sharing my joy, Rhonda. I thank God and I thank Nette for sponsoring the contest. I'm more than honored..haha. Aww...thank you for saying that. Hugs!Kim :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2015 9:47:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Patrice

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 6:59:00 AM

Thank you for sharing my joy, Joseph. I thank God and Nette for sponsoring the contest. Blessings to you! Kim :)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/26/2015 8:45:00 PM

Congrats on you win! :)

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 6:16:00 AM

Thank you, Ed, for sharing my joy. I thank God for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. We're both on the winners' list! Smiles from the isles...Kim :)

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/26/2015 8:09:00 PM

Congratulations Kim on your top win!! Excellence exhibited in this pleasing write. Love it. Hugs, Kimberly

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, for sharing my joy, my dear tukaya (Filipino word for someone who has the same name as you). I thank the Lord for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. I wish you a lovely day! Hugs! :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/26/2015 5:28:00 PM

superb Kim congrats on win hugs 7

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thank you for sharing my joy, Shadow. I thank God for this and Nette for sponsoring the contest. We're both on the winners' list! Thank you for the vist and the 7. Hugs! Kim :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2015 4:31:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thank you Broken, for sharing my joy. Appreciate your being here and the 7. Hugs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2015 4:06:00 PM

you convey such a delicate tone and voice in your work. kim...having you in my contest was a pleasure; big congrats!.. huggs

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 5:22:00 AM

Oh my, Nettie! I sure was dreaming of getting a place but didn't imagine this! This is such an honor for me. I thank God and you, for this. It was a pleasure writing the memento and joining your contest as well. Hugs! Kim :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2015 3:41:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/27/2015 5:13:00 AM

Wow, Jan! Thanks! My first top tier! Happy that you share my joy, dear friend! Hugs! Kim :)