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Melting Clocks (2009)

A sliding of time, one fatal move And you've become the reflection. Walking ever so uncomfortably, In the other mans shoes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/13/2009 2:30:00 AM
Nice work, reminds me of Salvador Dali...Raul
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Date: 6/13/2009 12:26:00 AM
Lovely enigma here Naomi.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/10/2009 2:40:00 PM
In the other mans shoe-Clever ending:Good work:)
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