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Melting Away

Walking through life with chipped shoulders weighing you down to the ground, burdening the mind with stress and woe numbing thought crippling the body, with aching pain in soul releasing suffocation from feeling trapped under cold ice, buried alive with indecision. Struggling to move forward from years of baggage, stored in worry and doubt surrendering to light energy flow liberating spirit with fluid motion envisioning solutions in the end, catching glimpses of the sun smiling upon you warming your frozen heart, thawing out the sadness from your long journey home contemplating gratitude visualizing well being, healing sorrows melting them away.

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Date: 9/23/2008 1:52:00 PM
How very painful, and still ending on a very inspirational note. Beautifully crafted poetry. I look forward to reading more of your work. My best, Charlie
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