melted clocks

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Monotangled Sense Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Di11y Da11y 11/28/2023

time stopped to count in a forgotten landscape where the clocks were melted

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Sotto Poet

Date: 11/28/2023 4:34:00 PM

Such a great monoku, Maria, your striking imagery can't go unnoticed. You perfectly conveyed the meaning of a melting clock here.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/28/2023 4:41:00 PM

My dear Sotto. Thank you so much. I think it's so easy to discover, but it doesn't matter, I' ve just thought about a monoku, and I wrote it. Thanks my friendxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 4:17:00 PM

wow, Maria. Your poem reminded me of Salvador Dali's famous painting titled "Clocks Melting" You've aptly put into words the meaning of that poem. I'm impressed. Have a great evening, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/28/2023 4:21:00 PM

Oh God Sara, how easy to be descovered something that it shoud take a while. Thanks so much. Have a nice evening my friend.