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Melted*****

when we look at each other my heart melts into his hands my love never fadesaway when i see him when we touch another we laugh but when my friends put us down like we have nothing my love is stong as long hes here my heart melts and love never fadesaway when he laughs im so into hes so soft spoken and im found by the way we talk and laugh to each other

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2009 11:07:00 AM
lol, I did it too... proof read I mean *
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:06:00 AM
great expression. you may want to check and proofread, a couple of your words kind of run together (needs spaced. keep on writing :)
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