Meltdown

Meltdown Put chocolate in your pocket on a warm summer day, Then gracefully try to unwrap it and you’ll find there is no way!

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 9/1/2013 8:19:00 AM

Ha! Ain't that the truth, cute John

John Posey
Date: 9/1/2013 10:31:00 AM

Yeah, wet kisses take on a whole new meaning here.... Jake

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/9/2013 8:43:00 PM

Ohh....a double melt down, very cool! I have this imagine of my sister having a melt down trying to unwrap her melted chocolate...LOL. Hugs

John Posey
Date: 7/10/2013 3:55:00 AM

aaaaahh, thanks Cecilia, but I did not make the cut with this one...Oh well... disappointment can morph into creativity.... This one will live to melt another day.... Hugs back atcha.... Jake

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/7/2013 7:11:00 AM

Loved this one from you my friend.Clever I agree.Sending greetings your way buddy.

John Posey
Date: 7/7/2013 8:46:00 AM

Thanks for the kudos. You are welcome to visit at any time....Jake

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/6/2013 11:04:00 PM

with just simple two lines of a simple task express a deep meaning. Thank you for sharing your experience

John Posey
Date: 7/7/2013 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comment.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2013 10:17:00 PM

hey john, just coming back to say hello. And I got your message down here!!

John Posey
Date: 7/6/2013 4:03:00 AM

It's always great to be greeted by an angel... Hello right backatcha.... Have a great weekend.... You've already made mine.... Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/5/2013 5:06:00 PM

Bittersweet, I'm a choc-a-holic. Lol, Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey
Date: 7/5/2013 5:56:00 PM

I thank you, dearie. your amusement is reward enough for me.... Jake

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/5/2013 10:49:00 AM

this occurs all the time... even with m& m's which are supposes to melt in mouthh, not in your hands... oh , your words melt wonders, john!..:) huggs

Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/7/2013 11:03:00 AM

oops, ' supposed'... thanks, john...:)

John Posey
Date: 7/5/2013 11:36:00 AM

Nette, dear friend, I am always thrilled to see your sweet avatar bringing such encouraging comments. You are a real peach..... Love ya dearly.... Jake

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/4/2013 7:00:00 PM

Hi john, What a meltdown,, I love it:0) goodluck!!...cheriex

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 7:16:00 PM

Thanks, Cherie. It's great to hear from you... Your comments are appreciated.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 5:34:00 PM

john, I hope you won't mind but I am going to try to do an M and M poem based on this meltdown theme. Hoping it will turn out as good as YOUR chocolate poem and I hope you won't mind me borrowing your idea of candy/ this little rhyming couplet is just SO good.

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 5:50:00 PM

When any writer inspires the master, of course It's OK for the master to proceed...... As long as you give me the prize money.... Hugs, Darlin'... Get after it!...Jake

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/4/2013 3:20:00 PM

I really hate when that happens! Good one, John. Thank you for your encouraging comments on my poems. Love, Kim

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 4:53:00 PM

Kim, I thank you for your visits and encouraging comments.... Jake

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/4/2013 2:48:00 PM

Jake, ha ha .... love the artful humor. Been there, done that :)

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 2:52:00 PM

Thanks, Karen. Your laughter brings joy to my heart. Love ya ... Jake

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 7/4/2013 12:43:00 PM

You made me laugh, John. Very funny :) Have a Happy Fourth!

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, dear. It's reward enough to know I brought a little humor to you... Love ya ..... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 10:06:00 AM

hahaha, I LOVE how you chose to do this one. Wish I had thought up something clever like this.

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 12:36:00 PM

Thanks for the kudos... I always treasure anything that makes you smile.....Jake

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 AM

Ha ha, very true my friend. Stick it in the freezer and try again in a few hours.

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 8:58:00 AM

You're a little late with your suggestion there, Richard. It's reached the point of ...."Who's gonna clean up this mess?".... Thanks for all your reads and comments... I truly appreciate them..... Jake

Heather Ober

Date: 7/4/2013 8:24:00 AM

I love this one!! Such a creative and clever take on this contest :)

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 8:52:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend. My work gains respect with your approving comments....Jake

Kim Van Breda

Date: 7/4/2013 3:43:00 AM

Been there :) Your couplet is clever as the title implies a psychological meltdown-- but I guess this chocolate couplet could cause one :)

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 3:55:00 AM

Oops, did I step outside the box? That's really the first thing that came to mind. Thanks for visiting, Love ya... Jake