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Melt With Me Against a Toxic Sunset of Lust

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melt with me against a toxic sunset of lust light the burning candles illuminate the red hot metal lanterns dive naked into my arms raw take of my flesh as i take of yours lose ourselves one in the other devour the creamy liquid of my origin and i the nectar from your petal wrap yourself in the flag of me i too will fly your colors let us wage a war of sex on one another and leave no border uncrossed

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Date: 11/5/2014 10:02:00 AM
devour the creamy liquid of my origin and i the nectar from your petal. Marvelous use of words.( origin, petal) I have enjoyed it to the fullest and added it to my fav list. Thank you Maurice.....RAJAT
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:28:00 AM
Sexy good. :)
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:08:00 AM
wow, I agree with Jan. STEAMY. I LOVE how you write, and to think you don't even consider yourself a poet. Come ON, man!!!
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Date: 9/13/2014 12:27:00 PM
steamy and passionate Maurice and i agree with lovely James about the title:-) Hugs Jan x
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:45:00 PM
thank you Jan.
Date: 9/13/2014 11:58:00 AM
Love the title, and the poetry to follow is sensually steamy, and that's HOT!! - way to go Maurice, James :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:44:00 PM
thanks James.
Date: 9/13/2014 8:31:00 AM
Powerful and sensual Maurice...I thought it was all about the flower until the end lines....have an fantastic day :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 12:43:00 PM
right back at you.

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