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Melody of Sun Rays

Appearing as rays, Sun sends melodies of love, On disgruntled trees. Note: written for Raul Moreno's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/20/2009 4:01:00 PM
good job!! enjoyed reading
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Date: 11/20/2009 7:02:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Marty, best of luck in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 11/19/2009 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Marty. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:37:00 PM
I love this gentle melody..so beautiful--Charma
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:36:00 PM
recomment..im sorry you lost your Dag Marty,you re in my prayers too-Charma
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Date: 11/18/2009 7:58:00 AM
Good luck Marty....this was like a beautiful song! ~ :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2009 11:35:00 PM
Excellent write. If this is for Raul's contest, great luck to you, if not, it should be! Smiles from Lolita
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