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M - Morose and sad I rose this early morn... E - Eventually, the pounding of cold rain L - Left me to feel alone and so forlorn A - And know this dreary day would cause me pain. N - Now you have left me this first week of Fall... C - Canceled our dates, like picnicking 'neath trees; H - Hastened to close the pool and waterfall. O - Oh, melancholy me...please summer, please... L - Lift up my spirits just for one more day! Y - You left me cold with Fall and went away. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Melancholy Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 09/27/2016

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Date: 9/27/2016 9:17:00 PM
Nice acrostic, Sandra! Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/27/2016 1:18:00 PM
A very creative take on this contest. I love it. Good luck, hope you do well.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Armand. Sandra
Date: 9/27/2016 12:51:00 PM
Lovely acrostic, cleverly done. Congratulations. Blessings, Janis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/27/2016 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra on the placement of the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 3:59:00 PM
Another nice contest, Nayda, and thank you for my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/27/2016 9:44:00 AM
sweet Sandra- back with my congrats :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/26/2016 12:44:00 PM
What a very pretty poem. I love it form and how it flows. Thanks for sharing...........A.M.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/28/2016 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi, for your nice visit and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 9/26/2016 10:36:00 AM
lovely acrostic sweet Sandra-good luck :)-luloo
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Date: 9/26/2016 10:28:00 AM
A wonderful, sad acrostic pining for the loss of summer, Mrs Sandra. Very poetic:) Good luck!
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