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Melancholy

Sensory reveries float feathery, Softly, through my summary treasuries. There are flashes, small splashes That wander in random dashes Between my head and heart. Some precious memory stashes Often break dark and apart. I will feed on photo books Hoping repair requires but a look. It often ends with me shook By a bittersweet sharp dart And the smart of its hook. As I age, I feel little doubt Time neither shouts or pouts, But sprouts all feelings once jolly To cultivate seeds of melancholy.
September 25, 2016 Contest: Melancholy, Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron 2nd place

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Date: 9/28/2016 3:44:00 PM
A beautiful Lyric about the 'cultivation' of 'melancholy', CayCay, presented with nice rhymes. We can all identify with this as we age for sure. Congrats on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2016 7:03:00 PM
this is SUPER FINE poetry writing on melancholy, dear lady!! I miss you, my friend. Hope you are well. I bet there is an old email waiting for you to answer and I will keep waiting!! Luv, Andrea Congrats on your win here.
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Date: 9/27/2016 1:28:00 PM
Nice rhyming journey through photobook memories. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay on the placement of the contest
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Date: 9/27/2016 9:49:00 AM
CayCay- back with my congrats lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 9/27/2016 6:13:00 AM
I love the beginning alliteration. Your rhyme is unusual and very effective and your last couplet is wonderful. A very nice write CayCay.
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:22:00 AM
Love the line, "shouts nor pouts but sprouts". Melancholy is a bittersweet emotion to encounter. Great write. (thank you for your comments on my poem Farm gate, I take on board your suggestion)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/26/2016 9:22:00 AM
Mornin' Craig! So glad you enjoyed my poem and took the time to tell me, your comment is one I truly appreciate. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 9/26/2016 4:04:00 AM
I enjoy reading this gem of yours brilliant poet. I love the lyrical sound of your lyric. Excellent..........A.M.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/26/2016 9:21:00 AM
Such a nice comment to read at the beginning of my day! Thank you, Afolabi. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 9/25/2016 9:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2016 9:38:00 PM
Aw, shucks Tanis - you didn't need to come a callin'! But I thank you and wish you well ... Poetry hugs, CayCay
Date: 9/25/2016 8:09:00 PM
I feel as if melancholy is my middle name, I loved this poem CayCay!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2016 8:36:00 PM
Hey, Arthur Melancholy, I, CayCay Bittersweet, appreciate your greet and comments most sweet. Chin up ... (unless you need to look down, of course) CayCay B.
Date: 9/25/2016 6:58:00 PM
CayCay- I love the flow of this! It rings a beautiful tune :) good luck lady :)-luloo
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2016 8:36:00 PM
Thank you. I like your new pic - who are you head-snuggling? Take care ... CayCay

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