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Below is the poem entitled Melancholy which was written by poet Benjamin David. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Those smiles bloomed, blossomed fawned
As tears now wander
Upon hearts squander
Love's grave has securely, purely, spawned 

We kissed aflutter and danced in shimmer
And my hands apprised
But now glanced disguised
For the shadows glare dolour and dimmer

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  1. Date: 7/14/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Well written! The words are so ornamental and they really bring out the theme of melancholy with a fragrance of beauty. Glad I discovered your list of poetry. Will be reading some more. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Benjamin, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:58:00 PM
    Well done Benjamin, very nice.

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/22/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, Douglas, your words touch me.
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 7:55:00 AM
    First good poem I read today on this page. Great rhytm great imagery, but the title doesn't justify the atmosphere of the poem, or perhaps that was your intent, good job anyway.

    David Avatar Benjamin David
    Date: 3/22/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your compliments are endearing, thank you.